Though Whitman’s poetry and
Dickinson’s poetry operate in very different ways, both writers come from the
same timeframe in American history and literature. One literary quality they
share includes a fascination with the circularity of both life and death. In
the 3rd part of Whitman’s “Song of Myself,” he states, “I have heard
what the talkers were talking/ the talk of the beginning and the end/ But
I do not talk of the beginning or the end./ There was never any more inception
than there is now,/ Nor any more youth or age than there is now,/ And will
never be any more perfection than there is now,/ Nor any more heaven or hell than
there is now.” In these verses, Whitman does not appear to be troubled by death
or by the actions in his life. Death is a mere part of life; it is a beautiful
thing. Whitman admires the beauty of the whole world around him—that includes
death. He understands the inevitability of death and accepts it for what it is.
In fact, he embraces death later on in his poetry: “Nothing can happen more
beautiful than death.” He also states how he will return to the grass, and
people will walk over him. This is the circularity of death we see from him. Dickinson
also embraces this mindset. In the opening stanza of “Because I could not stop
for Death,” Dickinson states, “Because I could not stop for Death/ He kindly
stopped for me/ The Carriage held but just Ourselves/ And Immortality.” In
these lines, Dickinson recognizes the inevitability of death by stating that he
kindly stopped for her. This language
shows her acceptance, as well. Death is death; it is unavoidable and imminent.
However, Dickinson goes on to acknowledge immortality, which illustrates the
circularity of death. As a fervent, religious woman, Dickinson strongly
believes that after death comes eternal life. Again, this language of death and
immortality show the circularity of death she and Whitman share.
Both writers share
an appreciation for the natural world around them. Countless lines of both
writers’ poetry could be cited to illustrate this central quality. Both writers
use eloquent language and imagery to explain the world around them. It becomes evident
that they hold the beauty of nature in the highest of regards. Though imagery
is widespread, I will point to one particular poem of Dickinson’s that
summarizes her appreciation of nature without using excessive imagery or
eloquent language. In Dickinson’s “This is my letter to the World,” Dickinson
essentially writes a letter to the world (both the natural world and her fellow
people), asking others to recognize and foster the beauty seen in nature, which
has been given to us by God. The first stanza, “This is my letter to the World/
That never wrote to Me --/ The simple News that Nature told --/ With tender
Majesty,” expresses her concern for the world due to the mere fact that she is
driven to write such a letter. I believe the “News” in this poem resembles the
good news of the gospels. This line connects nature with the power of divinity
(God). With religion such a powerful force at this time, regarding God in
relation to nature reaffirms Dickinson’s love of nature, her opinion of
people’s disregard for nature, and the very real connection that exists between
nature and God people too often forget. Love of God and love of nature go hand
in hand for Dickinson. Switching gears, it is clear Whitman has a love of
nature. We see this from the very beginning of “Song of Myself.” However, the 16th section of
the poem takes us on a trip around the United States. From California to
Louisiana to Kentucky to Vermont, we see glimpses of the natural world in each
of these places: woods, hills, lakes, bays, coal mines, and snow all perpetuate
throughout the country, creating countless images of nature in the readers’ minds. In the 17th section, Whitman states, “These are really the
thoughts of all men in all ages and lands, they are not original with me/ If they are not yours
as much as mine they are nothing, or next to nothing, / If they are not the riddle and the untying of
the riddle they are nothing, / If they are not just as close as they are distant they are
nothing. / This is the grass that grows wherever the land is and the water is, / This the common air that
bathes the globe.” For me, these two stanzas show Whitman’s appreciation, love,
and awareness of nature and of his country’s unending beauty, in general.
Though there is no real connection to the divinity of nature like we see from
Dickinson, we still know both hold nature in high regard.
Lastly,
both writers have a seeming God-complex in their works. “This is my letter to
the World” and “My life closed twice before its close—“ both illustrate this
notion. In “This is my letter to the World,” one could assume (after a few
reads) that she is attempting to channel God’s message through her poetry.
Though Dickinson is known for her random punctuation and capitalization, in the
line, “That never wrote to Me,” I believe the Me is capitalized to assert the
presence of God in this poem. Furthermore, in “My life closed twice before its
close,” I believe God could be the speaker of that poem as well. God is an
infinite being, and is immortal. The lines, “My life closed twice before its
close --/ It yet remains to see/
If Immortality unveil/ A third event to me,” possibly could parallel the
trinity, “a third event” being Jesus’ rising from the dead, displaying his
immortality. Heaven and hell also exist in this poem, so I believe the presence
of those words lends to this theory. In Whitman, the lines of the 50th
section, “Do you see O my brothers and sisters? / It is not chaos or death
- it is form, union, plan - it is eternal life - it is Happiness,” sound
as if Whitman were God speaking to his followers. He speaks of his no fear
mentality of death as if he were Jesus walking out of the tomb on the 3rd
day. Though this is only one example, this God-complex perpetuates throughout
the poem. The next section starts, “The past and present wilt - I have fill'd
them, emptied them./ And proceed to fill my next fold of the future.” God is
past, present, and future. He is all-knowing and infinite. The “I” in this line
clearly resonates with the voice of God and him ruling his iron fist. I mean, he looks like our image of God in a weird way. Am I right?